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04-09-2007, 02:25 AM
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The Aviator Chronicles: Chapter 1
Set in the late Devonian, land plants have evolved into trees but no flowers yet. The arthropods have landed too.
Drey, a silverfish, lives with others of his species who believe in superstition thanks to their Shaman Leader, Zanura. When Drey's village near the pond was wiped out by "walking fish". No one believes him and he was labelled a lunatic and was exiled.
Later Drey encounters the Providence/Fate who speaks to him and tells him that it/she/he cannot help bring back his parents and friends to life or convince to his superstitous folks to the truth. But it however leads Drey to their murderers. But being primitive insect, he is beaten by lungfishes. At the edge of death, however the Providence transforms Drey into the...... Dragonfly!
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04-09-2007, 02:32 AM
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But I need help to make this more original.....
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04-11-2007, 07:59 AM
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so I hope your pros can help me
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04-11-2007, 11:08 AM
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Hmm. Something smells fishy. Not meaning to be rude, honestly, but is this some kind of joke?
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04-11-2007, 11:26 AM
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This makes absolutely no sense to me. If you want some kind of help with this try writing a bit then getting advice. As it is i really don't see what you can expect to get from us.
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04-11-2007, 11:40 AM
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HEY! Like it or not, I am not familiar with the story creating process[how should I start? How to plan a story?.......].... and this is what I can come up with so far......
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04-12-2007, 12:33 AM
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Like I said on your other post, it would be a good idea to write at least SOME excerpt of your story; start anywhere you want...its the best way to let us know what you want to do with this 
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04-12-2007, 04:01 AM
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Generally, you start writing. Then, after a while, you stop.
Then you start again and try not to make the same mistakes.
Repeat until satisfied.
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04-19-2007, 10:27 PM
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Aviation is actually a very exciting yet also boring subject if done in documentary style.
One can marvel at the process but it can become documentary-boring if done wrong..... but I am going to take a part fantasy part reality take on this tale. Since I am quite familar with 3ds max, zbrush and etc.................
I am also going add some human aspects on the insects to make them engaging to the audience.
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05-10-2007, 08:32 AM
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Basically this series of stories chronicles the process of Flight in a magical yet realistic manner. I am now studying the Rhynie Chert, which includes the land creatures in the Devonian.
Strange World indeed, if I was shrunk to the size of Drake, then his home of primitive lands plants which look like a carpet of bean sprouts to a human would look like a forest!
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