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Old 04-05-2007, 03:43 AM   #1
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Please help me revise my band lyrics
hi Guys!

I´m new here but I need your help concerning the lyrics of our new pop/rock band album.

I am Austrian, so my native language is german, but the lyrics are in english so I need revision by an english native speaker.

You would very much help me and of course receive a free CD as soon as the album wil be released.

Please post your email here or contact me via lr@tuesdaymusic.at then I will send you the lyrics... You would help me a lot!!!

cheers
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Old 04-05-2007, 07:53 AM   #2
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This should go in the secion entitled "Lyrics." You may get more responses that way. Good luck.
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Old 04-05-2007, 05:48 PM   #3
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i've been a lyricist [among many other things] and have mentored many wannabes... you can email me for help...

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Old 04-05-2007, 05:50 PM   #4
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Don't be afraid of your native tongue, great music has passed through the vocal chords of the Germans.

I would be glad to be of assistance, however.
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Hey Shawn!

Could you write me an email so that I have your email adress to send you the lyrics?

Thx...
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It's pretty much public domain: shornickel@gmail.com
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