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Old 04-05-2007, 10:10 AM   #31
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That's so funny that you wanted to lengthen the name of the Mecha designer...because originally that was my whole point--to have a robot named some long alpha-numeric thing which was ludicrious...really, I'm not kidding, it originally was Xb-19BBCa-100. But then I put Xb-19, and left it...God knows why...but anyway, ya, that was the whole point to hit it out of the park, not just to bunt it.

I meant only nixing the designer part, not the whole description. As far as the ship...ya, I could humor that up a bit...but I wanted...hell I don't know. I like the description. But I'm continually rewriting...so we'll see.

Thanks.

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