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Old 07-09-2004, 04:57 PM   #1
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HobbitKing
KING - A Novel in Progress

Hi, im 16 and am writing this story, this is the prologue introduction (not all of prologue) this story is working out great, it looks like it should get published. Read this first part of the book which I wrote:

‘This world is a strange place. Our lives are ruled by others and our leaders are ruled by rules. This is the law men and women have followed age after age. And it is the law which will stay until our demise.
Though some defy laws, they believe not in such things. These few are truly gifted for they alone have the power to shape our world. If it were not for them our lives would be meaningless, what is the point in living if we have no freedom?
One man knew this. But he did not want to. He knew that if he tried to change the way we live, the way we exist… it would bring terror to the world. So, he ignored it and let it dissolve into nothingness. He ignored his destiny.
Great leaders are born of great heroes - that is the philosophy which begins this tale. The man who did not want to face his true future would soon begin to realise, that his future is his destiny and his destiny is our future.’


IMPORTANT: This material is copyright by James Shortland. If this text is reproduced, altered or used in any other way I will take further actions. If you wish to ask me about this story, book or text then email me at: hobbitking224@hotmail.com
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