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Old 07-05-2004, 12:04 AM   #1
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An errand for Aragorn?

A story is yet writ, born of the fears, thoughts and desires of one who bears doubt.
I have been compiling a story-line and I seek a strange assistance, the story-line is based on ideals of LOTR with similar characterizations, I require someone to converse with me ( through email) in "Character" so that I can develop a personality for my personas in the story based on how you would respond. I require a "Character" and the type of character as I see it is of a Man or perhaps Elf, who has eloquence and maturity a.k.a Aragorn & Faramir or Elrond & Legolas. The characterization would be solely up to you, you speak of your thoughts, while questioning the very path they travel. The duty I have is to listen, truly hear and instill a belief. An excellent knowledge of LOTR and a learned attitude are required as your character must be believable. Alot of thought is required, one might even have to research things to give a good understanding of what they write. If your interested, send me an email ( writings@mail.com ) with details of the true you and also about your "Character" and three lines in answer to this:
When Man is by the world mislead,
it is not in himself to doubt.
But relinquish his hold on indecision.
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Old 07-05-2004, 03:21 AM   #2
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Is this a poetry thing? That is a great set of three lines, but it seems like poetry to me, not novel material.
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Old 07-05-2004, 07:13 AM   #3
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Airborneguy :

sentile : Why postest this in the critiqueth section? Sorry. Love LoTR. Hate FanFiction. Good luck.
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Old 07-07-2004, 12:20 AM   #4
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To Airborneguy: I thankyou on your kind words regarding the three lines.
Those lines are poetry, but do they paint an image in your mind? For that is its plan, its then the response that goes further.
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Old 07-07-2004, 09:45 PM   #5
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Re: An errand for Aragorn?

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A story is yet writ, born of the fears, thoughts and desires of one who bears doubt.
I have been compiling a story-line and I seek a strange assistance, the story-line is based on ideals of LOTR with similar characterizations, I require someone to converse with me ( through email) in "Character" so that I can develop a personality for my personas in the story based on how you would respond. I require a "Character" and the type of character as I see it is of a Man or perhaps Elf, who has eloquence and maturity a.k.a Aragorn & Faramir or Elrond & Legolas. The characterization would be solely up to you, you speak of your thoughts, while questioning the very path they travel. The duty I have is to listen, truly hear and instill a belief. An excellent knowledge of LOTR and a learned attitude are required as your character must be believable. Alot of thought is required, one might even have to research things to give a good understanding of what they write. If your interested, send me an email ( writings@mail.com ) with details of the true you and also about your "Character" and three lines in answer to this:
When Man is by the world mislead,
it is not in himself to doubt.
But relinquish his hold on indecision.
Wow, that's a neat idea. . . having people converse as a character for you? Neat. . . oh, and I love LOTR, by the way. . .
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Old 07-09-2004, 03:32 PM   #6
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ok...

uh, go here and you can do LOTR roleplaying....which is like that...and... stuff....

The link is of an old RP me and my buddies did, I am Dubhlainn. That one isn't running anymore, but check the site out, and see if you want to maybe get involved with that.

http://forums.middle-earthonline.com...&pagenumber=42
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