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Old 05-28-2004, 05:19 PM   #1
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Interpretations are welcome

huh. I wrote this poem, but I have no idea what it means... it's so confusing. I know it relates to these two characters of mine... but I'm not sure what kind of love situation this describes. With them, it could be anything....

Archer of Love
by Cora Windover

Shoot my heart and leave me
I'm lying here, I'm bleeding
And I wish those sky-blue eyes
Would look this way just one more time
Gold arrows draw steel tears
From this stone-cold heart of mine
And the fire will be burning
From this final day of learning
I will listen to this rhyme
'Til the final breath of time
"Gold arrows draw steel tears
From this stone-cold heart of mine."


mehhhhh i don't know what it meeeeeeeeans.....
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Old 05-28-2004, 05:56 PM   #2
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Very well written. If I may take a stab at what it is about, I feel it is about lost love. You have an amazing way with words. Keep writing!
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