phantom73

Late at night
when dark shadows climb the walls,
prowling through the night,
a pair of shining eyes keep watch...
Glowing green orbs that pierce the darkness,
flitting here, then there
slowly, silently, trailing close behind!
I slowly walk along the hall
when out of the dark,
a figure darts
and disappears, melting into the shadows.
Only to reappear with a faint meow,
Oh what a relief
...It's only the cat!

Capulet

Not bad at all. Good word choice, the pace seems even and appropriate. Don't use the ... to denote a pause though, there's other appropriate punctuation for that. Overall you get a thumbs up, keep at it!

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