Luc

Basically I've got back to a fic I was doing which is a background novel to an IFF work that I'm doing, though really I'm after people who can review daily a fic I set up called lotr/suikoden: The lotte chronicle.

I'm doing this fic for two reasons:

1) to serve as background

2) It's my attempt in creating a long novel like story. You don't really need to know the suikoden history as I'll exlain that to newcomers, all I need is people who can tell me if this is intresting, good or not etc.

http://www.fanfiction.net/read.php?storyid=1288466

edit: I'll be grateful if you can send your reviews on the site itself by clicking submit review button at the end of the fic chapter. If not than just review here.

Bluesparkles

sure ill help you out

Luc

Thanks

Bluesparkles

when would you like me to start helping you?

Luc

Any time soon really, I'm going to make my next chapter soon and I would like a review (in detail if u can) on it's strength and weakness and what u think of it as a whole so far.

Kitten Courna

Did you try the fanfiction forums as well? that might be a good place to ask if you haven't.

-Kitten

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Luc

Oh right than, thanks.