Guineapiggy

It's in the fiction forum if ye wish to read. I'm very excited about getting feedback, tips, techniques and advice. I just like looking for new methods, ideas and, being dyspraxic, having mistakes pointed out. (It's a bizarre sensation, even when my brain knows what words to use, the correct grammar and spelling my hands seem to want to stick to multiple dots and phoenetics )

Either way tell me what you think it needs, chapters 1 - 3 up

Lily

Ick! I keep on clicking on this thread thinking I'm going to see a story and then I only see a post telling me to go to the other forum . . . *sighs and drags herself over to the 'short-story' or 'fiction' forum or whatever . . .*

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Insufferable Know-it-all.

Guineapiggy

Hehehe, sorry, habbit from an old forum that was run in this manner

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I'll sing along, yeah with every emergency. Just sing along, I'm the king of catastrophies. I'm so far gone that deep down inside I think it's fine by me that I'm my own worst enemy.