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Old 07-11-2008, 11:55 AM   #1
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Creating Empathy

Hi, in my novel a character dies quite near the beginning and i was wondering how I could make the reader feel empathetic towards that character as it has a very large significance in the novel and character motivation,

thanks in advanced, hope someone can help
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A quick, easy way to do this, if he's out on some kind of journey or mission or something, is to just have them think about how much they can't wait to get home to see his/her family...spouse, kids, parents, whatever. Detail their thoughts about what they'll do and say when they finally meet said relatives...it's a pretty tried and true method...how many times have you seen some private in a war movie looking at a picture of his wife before he bites it? Anyway, it sets the character up as being a human being and not just some cardboard cutout character whose only reason for existing is to die for plot reasons.

Of course, the downside is that if done wrong it can look like a copout or just a cheesy attempt to make us care. I hope this helped some.
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well, in the one book I have finished, a character who dies near the beginning is the main character's father. If there's any kind of family connection to the rest of the book, have that dying person's son\daughter\neice\nephew\wife\husband etc think about them often, reflect upon their death. may not really create empathy, I don't know, but it's an idea.

eh, I would just go with sisera if I was you.
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Good advice, sisera!

Very easy to make it a cop-out. I can usually tell when a character is going to die in a movie just because the writer goes into an extra tidbit of wonderfulness to make the audience see this will-be-dead-soon-guy/gal as a sympathetic human being. Happens quite often in horror and action movies.

Trick again is to make us see the person who dies as a legitimate, breathing, feeling person. We have to get a peek inside that person's motivations--and we have to like what we see.
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This is going to be hard!

Thanks for the advice.
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