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Highest concentration of certain propensities... More like which concentration: Palm Springs, Laguna Beach, West Hollywood, Belmont Shores...the list
The problem is your characters seem to be directly addressing the audience instead of maintaining audience blindness.
Kind of like this:
Jay, thank you so much for this thought-out, systematic approach. Some people pay for this kind of advice... Yet you give it free.
Scream the hope that drives man on
subdue the doubt that lingers yon
search for courage its strength to find
shun the weakness fear