[QUOTE=ForgedinFlames;1631975]I love the concept and think that you could really create some strong images if you slowed down to heighten the senses,
My mistake, I didn't see your suggestion in the thread.
I work 10-14 hours per day. I write on weekends. Weeknights are typically
I don't usually like dialogue free blocks of description, but I thought this was interesting. One sentence bothered me:
"They must have
I mentioned Native American names.
And why aren't you writing?
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