As I always say, anyone can write a book, but it takes work to write a good book.
Personally, I don't think I could just remove something like that... Everyone's brain works differently, and certain things work for some people and (possibly)
I can't think of a work of fiction that I've read recently where the narrator referred to the characters by only their surname, unless, of course, that
Yeah, but I suck. I really suck. My sister always beat me a checkers and overall I am smarter than her. Have a higher IQ and everything--above average
Splitting enough hairs here to give King Kong the frizzies. The Fault in Our Stars in a character driven novel. Nothing more or less. There's no need