I like the idea of him not noticing his own existence being right there at the beginning, because what child does? That said, I'd change the word order
Come now, let's not make this about Americans and how they are so much different than the rest of the world. Every country has horrible people that will
For yet another pathetic snipe, you're starting to come up with your own collection of people who are doing it.
I'm not interested in the most likely prompts, so if I'm considered good enough (and if you don't already have a full judging panel) I'll put my hand
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