Thread: My Boys- first draft, no edit

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I have not read right through, I don't think I am really your target audience, but it looks like decent, clean writing, one piece of advice I would give is perhaps reduce to one chapter, this is a lot to take on, then post chapter two next week as a follow on etc.

Thanks for the advice, Olly! I shortened it to just the preface and chapter 1. Hopefully it helps!