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Old 03-21-2008, 08:47 PM   #136
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I mean, it's like saying "My name's Jerome" What's the big deal?
No, it's not. "Call me..." is different from "My name's..." because it introduces uncertainty: is he phrasing it like that because it's the name he's going by, rather than his real name? It introduces doubt into the narrative right at the start.

By the way, if The Canterbury Tales can be called a novel, then here's a nice long opening sentence:

Whan that Aprill with his shoures soote
The droghte of March hath perced to the roote,
And bathed every veyne in swich licour
Of which vertu engendred is the flour;
Whan Zephirus eek with his sweete breeth
Inspired hath in every holt and heeth
The tendre croppes, and the yonge sonne
Hath in the Ram his halve cours yronne,
And smale foweles maken melodye,
That slepen al the nyght with open ye
(So priketh hem nature in hir corages);
Thanne longen folk to goon on pilgrimages,
And palmeres for to seken straunge strondes,
To ferne halwes, kowthe in sondry londes;
And specially from every shires ende
Of Engelond to Caunterbury they wende,
The hooly blisful martir for to seke,
That hem hath holpen whan that they were seeke.
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Old 03-21-2008, 09:11 PM   #137
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"In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit..."

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Old 04-11-2008, 03:13 AM   #138
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"My father had a face that could stop a clock."

-The Eyre Affair by Jasper Fforde

What I love about it is how this sentance, when read alone, could turn the whole novel upside down. The sentance that follows it is awesome too though, and definitely adds to the absolute greatness of this opening line:

"I don't mean that he was ugly or anything, it was simply a term used by the Chrono Guard to describe an individual with the abilty to reduce time to an ultra-slow trickle."

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Old 04-17-2008, 04:03 AM   #139
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Old 05-03-2008, 12:50 PM   #140
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"It is a universally acknowledged truth, that a single man in possession of a good fortune, must be in want of a wife."

I loves it!
Completely agree - I think it is the most powerful of all her opening sentences. Pride and Prejudice is the only one of her works that does not jump straight into a character but gives the reader a philosophy to ponder over.

I doubt it will ever be beaten
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"The building was on fire and it wasn't my fault."
Jim Butcher, Harry Dresden Files. (I think it was Blood Rites, but don't quote me on that)

That is the only opening line I've ever been able to remember.
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Old 05-04-2008, 05:08 PM   #142
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"The sun shone, having no alternative, on the nothing new." Samuel Beckett, Murphy

"Every summer Lin Kong returned to Goose Village to divorce his wife, Shuyu." Ha Jin, Waiting

"I was born twice: first, as a baby girl, on a remarkably smogless Detroit day in January of 1960; and then again, as a teenage boy, in an emergency room near Petoskey, Michigan, in August of 1974." Jeffery Eugenides, Middlesex

"The human race, to which so many of my readers belong, has been playing at children's games from the beginning, and will probably do it till the end, which is a nuisance for the few people who grow up." G.K. Chesterton, The Napoleon of Notting Hill

"Granted: I am an inmate of a mental hospital; my keeper is watching me, he never lets me out of his sight; there's a peephole in the door, and my keeper's eye is the shade of brown that can never see through a blue-eyed type like me." Ralph Manheim, The Tin Drum

"He was born with a gift of laughter and a sense that the world was mad." Raphael Sabatini, Scaramouche
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Okay, so a couple of them are more than one sentence, but they're all good 'openers'...

‘I am ninety. Or ninety three. One or the other.’ Water for Elephants – Sara Gruen

‘It was Napoleon who had such a passion for chicken that he kept his chefs working round the clock.’ The Passion – Jeanette Winterson

‘This is a story about a man named Eddie and it begins at the end, with Eddie dying in the sun.’ The Five People You Meet in Heaven – Mitch Alborn

‘What’s it going to be then, eh?’
There was me, that is Alex, and my three droogs, that is Pete, Georgie and Dim, Dim being really dim, and we sat in the Korova Milkbar making up our rassoodocks what to do with the evening, a flip dark chill winter bastard though dry.
A Clockwork Orange – Anthony Burgess

‘All children, except one, grow up.’ Peter Pan - J.M. Barrie

‘I write this sitting in the kitchen sink.’ I Capture the Castle - Dodie Smith

‘Christmas won't be Christmas without any presents.’ Little Women - Louisa May Alcott

'They're out there.
Black boys in white suits up before me to commit sex acts in the hall and get it mopped up before I can catch them.' One Flew Over the Cuckoo's Nest - Ken Kesey
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