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Beginning of a fiction novel

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by , 01-03-2011 at 03:39 AM (111 Views)
Sooo heres the first paragraph of something Im writing... let me know if it sounds good and I'll keep on writing.


I watched the world fall apart.

My program name is Vampira 01; I was the first of my kind to be created. We were human, implanted with electronic chips designed to make the perfect assasin and obedient dog. All of them lost their humanity and had no choice but to obey. I was different. How I am different became the key to human survival...

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