Another revamp of an old poem. Eliminated about three stanzas and added some rhymes. ________________ Death in the Long Grass After Emily Dickinson My father’s favorite book – hardback edition – the crisp pages a sandy sort of color. The green perched stems of grass rise on the cover and subtly morph into roasted, yellow death. A lion – steady, just off center – is hidden by the stems. The ...
This is a little deposit of short poems. Most of these are completely cut down versions of older poems. I find this editing style works nicely for me. ____________________ A Man Someone lives near the edge – (a man who runs about the clouds) leaps off the ledge in graceful bounds. _________________________ Death Death is the cold room where shades are drawn and ...
Updated 07-15-2012 at 04:21 PM by Squalid Glass
A few years ago I posted the original few drafts of this poem. Now I have edited it a ton and am wondering how it sounds. I decided to take the original form and add rhymes to it. I don't know if abbaab is a form, so if anyone knows, let me know! Thoughts are welcome, thanks! _____________________ Because (After Yannis Ritsos) Because the line of Chevy’s smoking Marlboros in the cold street. Because of snow angles flapping in ...
Updated 07-15-2012 at 03:23 PM by Squalid Glass