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1. How would you feel about this character?
2. Writer's Failsafe
3. Idiot Wind - a childhood story and a tribute to Dylan
4. "Violence" Trilogy project - feedback please.
5. Untitled - Feedback Please
6. My NEW Endeavor - Sensory Scenes
7. Moving on
8. Dirty Little Secret
9. 1st timer-opinion please
10. Best approaches to large~massive scale combat?
11. How do you prefer to portray combat?
12. Three Hearts: Chapter One (Advice/feedback much appreciated)
13. Vendetta, Chapter 1
14. Creating Empathy
15. Ellia, Vamperess Chapter 3
16. A Bloody Facade (256 words)
17. When we say Martial arts, What comes to mind first?
18. Left behind - 975 words.
19. Abuse
20. Hook? 1500 words
21. What do you think?
22. Perspective Question
23. Ellia, Vamperess Chapter 2
24. In Memory of Nothing
25. Poem
26. When is it Erotica
27. First chapter- advice, please :)
28. Ellia, Vamperess Chapter 1
29. Give Us the Title of Your Book
30. Untitled- (Fraction of ch 1?)
31. Part of story-- need your opinions, please :)
32. The first part of chapter ONe...
33. Spirits of Nature - need help with the beginning (about 2500 words)
34. maintaining projected length
35. Another sample of my novel-comments welcome
36. The Zodiac Missions
37. Releasing stories under Creative Commons - Your thoughts?
38. Terms
39. Medieval Fantasy
40. Once Acquiescence
41. If I could sell my soul to the devil, if I could send my soul to hell, I would...
42. Sonora Symphony
43. Short Stories about Sonora Desert and such
44. Two Timing
45. Read Review and Critique?
46. A small section of a huge story! Poorly written!
47. How long is too long?
48. My Summer Hellcation (1100+ words)
49. Passing Time
50. Ma Cherie
51. Extract from novel
52. The First Words Ive Written in 22 Years
53. Need help with this short section
54. Please Chose the Least Awful
55. Gadon Stone Chapter 1 (2,231 words)
56. To trust your reader?
57. Need some information!
58. "Unification" Chapter 1
59. When You Don't Want To Disclose Their Gender
60. [Devious] Chapter5 needs editing, i hope it's alright...i think it's a my better one
61. a-random-page-a-day
62. reality in hell
63. Character letter (600 words)
64. I'd appreciate some feedback, thanks
65. Prologue to a sci-fi story.
66. Running Is always Easier (First Bits of Ch.1)
67. Feedback, Please?
68. Do you recognise this plot?
69. Second Coming
70. Collaring My Puppy
71. Can someone answer this?
72. Of Ice and Blood
73. Sticks
74. Please comment on my blog writing
75. Director: Eastenders Episode (Please Critique)
76. The Abnormally Short Life of Elliot Blue (a desperate attempt at writing again)
77. Untitled. Again.
78. Intro to untitled story
79. a future blog article
80. Untitled
81. Wall of Candy (391 words)
82. short piece for crit and advice (sexual content)
83. [Devious] Chapter4 needs editing, any good?????
84. Its not exactly Writer's Block...
85. how is my blog writing?
86. THE SUN SCOWLED TODAY (256 words)
87. A short, short excerpt from Ch. 1...please be honest!
88. Doesn't Want To Be A Hero
89. Give us your first line!
90. Am seeking writing critique partners
91. Need a little help
92. Which Is A Better Title
93. Yankee Point: Homelife (about 2,300 words)
94. [Devious] Chapter3 needs editing, any good?????
95. Poety...ish...
96. "Origin" -- Advice Please
97. NEW REVISION....SOUND ANY BETTER?
98. Query Letter - Waltzing in the Shadows
99. The Car
100. Beyond the Pillars of Heracles
101. What you will
102. Do my explanations make any sense?
103. Romantic part of my Novel - warning! Long.
104. A childrens sci fi project... but what way to go?
105. Vegas Boy Chapter 5.
106. I found this in the vaults (1,165 words)
107. Is it scary or does it suck? Grammar-whores welcome.
108. Help again please. I've revised!!
109. 1st 1/3 of my Prologue (832 words)
110. Guys and Gals, I am in desperate need of your assistance
111. The Dessert Apple
112. does this getcha?... or not?
113. What do you think of this???
114. Does this hook you? (First 300 words of story)
115. AJ's book gray Time's
116. GULAG Journal
117. Bicycles and Underwear
118. Query - Waltzng in the Shadows
119. Question
120. New to wrighting tips please?
121. Rah's Adventure (first write)
122. A Site for the World 1
123. Short Stort....title pending
124. Very short story, tell me what you think
125. Very short story, tell me what you think
126. Need advice with an essay on Video Games!
127. Better next time
128. Ok
129. First Chapter of story....what do you think?
130. Short blurb from a story.
131. Best Character Description in 150 words...
132. My first writing in more than 2 months
133. Just waking up to roll over. ((short story))
134. Modern Conjunctures
135. Critique This Fan Fiction
136. Does this have any Pizazz?
137. untitled
138. Question
139. Untitled work (fantasy)
140. Untitled work (fantasy)
141. "Wildcat" short scene
142. "Stacy"-Prologue
143. Furies Path
144. Clarity.
145. Critical Eye Needed~Thanks for reading!
146. Draft: They Tried to Kill the Sky
147. The Specimen - Prolog and Chapter 1
148. They Called It a Spider, I Knew Different - Part III
149. Prologue
150. [Ch. 1] That Sick
151. future drama
152. The Fifth Protocol (Working Title)
153. Young Adult fiction with older protagonists?
154. Senior Year
155. Character quirks - What's too much?
156. More from "Demon Trap" 1900 words of 176,349
157. Haunted ice cube
158. Very short introduction - Does it work?
159. Shadeland Chapter 1 Part 3
160. Shadeland Chapter 1 Part 2
161. Shadeland: Chapter 1
162. The Biography of Daniel McCade: Introduction
163. Short Story
164. Beginning of story
165. Tense of this paragraph?
166. [Ch. 2] Pluck of the Draw
167. Delusion (Part 1) : A Novel In Process
168. Article I am thinking of publishing
169. The Passing Place (supernatural horror, contains strong language)
170. Untitled but by far my best work. So far.
171. Very last part of a story - 120 words.
172. Help with Wizard’s Quest
173. Short story. Do you like it?
174. When Lightning Strikes
175. Shadeland: The Prologue
176. untitled
177. Does this opening work?
178. Giving an Arm and a Leg to Fix a Broken Finger
179. Up to chance
180. Vegas Boy Chap. 3
181. Vegas Boy Chap. 2 Pt. 2
182. Vegas Boy Chap. 2 Pt. 1
183. Vegas Boy Chap. 1
184. Teen Angst
185. Just a vision I had on the train
186. Suspense Thriller - Torture Porn
187. The Section That Does Not Come Out Right
188. lost and found edited
189. Four Black Matches
190. Bits and Pieces (3000 words)
191. "They Called It A Spider, I Knew Different" (UPDATED)
192. very short story
193. Lady Scarlet's Protege
194. A read of my stuff
195. Beginning of a chapter (Sci-fi)
196. Essay Critique...please
197. Hi. I need some help with my writing.
198. Catcher in the Rye critique
199. A novel I'm working on.
200. Affirmative Action Essay RD
201. Essay
202. Not ...Like Aesop's Fables - The First Fable!
203. Steam "punk" story snippets (Comedy?)
204. Medical Type Question
205. Helix spire [chapter 7] - Nexus Xenon
206. Advice appreciated - An Index necessary for a Chronology?
207. Age of Sin - Excerpt of Chapter One (1,361 words)
208. They Called It A Spider, I Knew Different (UPDATE #2)
209. Pandora - Writers block
210. "Sleepers" - Prologue & Chapter One
211. My speech. Please give feedback.
212. How do I stop "ranting"
213. The persuasive use of projected worlds in advertising
214. a question about etiquette
215. Chapter Aid
216. Plot Help for a Short Story
217. new published writer with some minor woes
218. Pursuit
219. Bleeding Tears of Joy
220. They Called It A Spider, I Knew Different (UPDATED)
221. plot hang-up... little brainstorming help?
222. Untitled horror - 400 words - keep going?
223. Inmortia
224. "Demon trap" Chapter Three 1838 words.. very violent content
225. Mr. Moyer's Problem - 749 words
226. So this might be cheating...
227. Probably the wrong place to ask but.
228. AshenGlade Prologue Excerpt
229. The Syndicate-Chapter One
230. Quick question
231. Too Many Adjectives?
232. A Personal Creed [for school]
233. Chracter Before The Plot?
234. Could you critique this?
235. "Demon Trap" Chapter two of a Novel Ive been writting 1875 words
236. short story fairy tales
237. How long before you really start describing a scene?
238. Unexpected Favor (1304 words)
239. characterization: cardboard or boring?
240. Short humor piece
241. The Cruel Nature of Redemption
242. Lyrics - stopping halfway for a bit of critique
243. Characterization Problems:
244. Pseudonym
245. My Journey - Needing Imput
246. SING suggestions
247. The 'BOOK'
248. "THEY CALLED IT A SPIDER, I KNEW DIFFERENT"
249. Apocalypse Game-A Novel
250. Need advice - Problems starting one charecter group