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751. Hey New to Forum, just asking for a bit of help
752. Prologue of duo of destiny, my last remake, i'm sticking with this. Need Tough crit.
753. writing a fantasy comedy
754. Dark Fantasy - Cursed Insanity.
755. Untitled Prolouge
756. Opening to a novel
757. Continuing my story. Chp 4 &5
758. Hostile Intent (Revamped and first chapter added)
759. Falling in Love -Please Critique!! :)
760. Do tell me what you think...
761. Niger Lamia: Black Vampire
762. banned-fromthebackporch.blogspot.com
763. Odd question
764. Untitled - Needs Help
765. Anything Going on Here?
766. necrophobia-realistic?
767. The Rattletrap.
768. Half Sisters YA story About 2500 words
769. New story called The Magic of Nature
770. New story called The Magic of Nature
771. New story called The Magic of Nature
772. A Concept (a little help please)
773. Easy Street (Final Chapters)[Adult Language]
774. Hard Friction - Opening Page
775. Villains: Motives and aspirations
776. http://nathanhondros.blogspot.com
777. valentines day letter
778. Easy Street (Chapter 16 & 17)[Adult Language]
779. The Empyreal Device Part 1
780. We Taught Them To Love Then We Gave Them All Guns
781. split a story
782. Jimmy Styles
783. Have characters, need story
784. Story Number 2 - Sylvia
785. Untitled - Please critique
786. chapter one of duo of destiny, please feel free to comment.
787. i am a website developer and a writer
788. White Wall
789. Insane story idea...
790. Help!
791. Show don't tell...
792. Writing of a 13 year old!
793. Opinions?
794. Morning, 1170 words
795. "True Reality", contains some foul language
796. Opening paragraph - Eighty-three words.
797. Fear
798. Help me kick around essay ideas
799. Just wanted a bit of feedback
800. Rosewood: Memories of the Fallen Angel(Chapters three and four.)
801. (not titled as of yet) please advise!!
802. Easy Street (Chapter 14 & 15)[Adult Language]
803. Writing magazine style articles for the internet.
804. Looking for advice on Training
805. HELP!!!
806. Blog
807. "The Runaway"
808. Watchman Part 3
809. The Painter in Proximity
810. The end of the Empire
811. Need feedback for this piece(google doc,) (6500 words) Accepting all feedback.
812. A Death Story Seeking Critique and Advice
813. Unnamed Fantasy Book
814. The Ever-Winter (comments wanted)
815. "Smokey Valley"
816. The Truth About God - SFShort needs Critique
817. First bits of a story
818. Does it work?
819. Hi i need help but i dont know if this is the right place
820. Hostile Intent
821. Critique: Ch. 1, section 1
822. Easy Street (Chapter 12 & 13)[Adult Language]
823. Advice/assistance w/ Writing Technique
824. Will you share tips for column syndication?
825. Please help new writer!
826. Some script crit, Please.
827. Need tough critques, don't hold back what so ever:
828. SO How's This? - please review and comment -
829. erm crtique
830. Opening for a novel (read and review please)
831. need critiques
832. Night Duty
833. ONLY VILLAINS - critique this chapter to death!
834. Need harsh critique! New story beginning
835. Entente - Chapters 1 & 2
836. Long Lunch (horror/zombie; language/violence; 3,200 words)
837. I'm starting a story...
838. Beauty has no color...
839. Tepid
840. first chapter of my novel
841. untitled...
842. Easy Street (Chapter 10 & 11)[Adult Language]
843. Letter to my school board.
844. Need concrit on the beginning of a story
845. Scrapped Novel
846. which title sounds better?
847. Blink and I'm Gone - A novel for children
848. character profession
849. First try at writing - a short story, fantasy
850. The Man in The Moon
851. Easy Street (Chapter 8 & 9)[Adult Language]
852. Through a hail of fire - A Working title for a WW1 short story
853. Marriage Counseling (suspense-ish; 1,400 words; mild language)
854. 2:00 A.M without sleep
855. Where is My Mind (first part please critique)
856. A sample of my novel ´Moles´
857. Am I in the right tense? Word Count: 3246
858. Black Ice
859. Untitled Urban Fantasy
860. Darryl en Route (1,199 words)
861. Joyville(Gaiman-ish short story)
862. part of a compliation for fiance...
863. USS Blackheart (working title)
864. What does it take for sci-fi or fantasy to be scary?
865. Reaper Comes Calling
866. Local paper easiest inroad 4 beginner?
867. Help with dedication to another author
868. 'The United Dystopia' [Sci-Fi, Excerpt][875words]
869. 17 yr old with a book
870. A short scene, 355 words
871. The Last of His Kind
872. There's No "I" In "Dream" (dark humor, 4,000-5,000 words)
873. 6 Scenes To Remember (716 words)
874. Help With Ending.
875. Help! Which hook to choose?
876. Isten August
877. Macbeth HOD C/C of Evil
878. Distorted Hysteria-Chapter Five
879. Critique my narrative please
880. He Takes The Train
881. Unnamed book, intro
882. Easy Street (Chapter 7)[Adult Language]
883. Hero Of Germania
884. book proposal help
885. I welcome your thoughts regarding my recent blog post/story about the rain
886. the alex/ross job ch. 1
887. My Rewritten Story.
888. John
889. First Short Story [Adult Lang] (lots of help needed)
890. short story (2500 words)
891. Please Critque my blog
892. A Beowulf Essay (general help)
893. Easy Street (Chapter 6)[Adult Language]
894. My first story beginning; please give critique.
895. Crime Fiction(reworked)
896. Angels and Demons - New Post
897. part of first chapter of story
898. Criticisms of my novella "black august"
899. all comments welcome
900. Childhood Prostitution - Needs title and smooth flow
901. Glass Half Empty (Any Good?)
902. 9th grade in need of help
903. Shadow Bolt: The End of the World - Part 1 of 62
904. Criticism on first chapter please.
905. Project Rebirth (1,2,3)
906. 3rd and could be last attempt at start of story
907. Behind Doors Which Should Stay Closed
908. Easy Street (Chapter 5)[Adult Language]
909. Constructive criticism welcome
910. 1/100
911. (new post) admission essay. please kindly critique.
912. short story advise
913. does it hook you in any way
914. New opening to battle - Please critique
915. Thinking Ahead (very short) (unedited)
916. The Watchman (Part Two)
917. Summertime (song)
918. Extermination
919. Prologue for a story
920. Help me find my voice!!! read this and give me your opinions PLZ
921. Easy Street (Chapter 4)[Adult Language]
922. SM101 - Soldiers Manual Online
923. Chapter one "Rough"
924. Congito, Ergo Sum
925. Harvest is coming: intro to a vampire story
926. The Kidder
927. first or third person
928. My first fiction. Tear it up.
929. Heartbreak Avenue (temporary title)
930. I need to break a cappucino machine
931. SM 101 - Soldiers Manual
932. Random Fantasy Prolouge
933. I'll get around to it:Procrastination
934. Good read or not? Boring?
935. Jeremy,Chuck and..."I"
936. Please do your worst :)
937. I had to write a parody of the Canterbury Tales prolgue. What do you think of it?
938. Proletarian (Humano)
939. A long short story-will cont. on next thread
940. The most simple logic
941. Critique my 21st century writing! (Pretty please with cherries on top?)
942. Retreat to Reyvajenik IV
943. To Seek Out Publisher or To Not Seek Out Publisher
944. Creative writing course
945. Learning to smoke
946. Combined journalism and fiction diploma
947. Need Critique Please
948. Ok heres my idea.(Or the skeleton of one anyway)
949. Criticism Please.
950. Beginning of My First Short Story
951. Boston-short story (need critique)
952. i need lots of help with this
953. Critcism please
954. Easy Street (Chapter 3)[Adult Language]
955. Storytelling inside a story?
956. Looking for some feedback. Also a first post!
957. Desk 4G
958. Prologue
959. Punctuation
960. Peter Was An In-Betweener
961. The Angels
962. Psychistrist's Office
963. Holy Wars: Story of the Black Maiden
964. A Sexual Scene with older man and younger girl
965. The Royal Island of Beauty (circa 2,500 words)
966. Messin' With Piggy
967. Pride & Prejudice based story?
968. Easy Street (Chapter 2)
969. Starting a story?
970. In the Process of Thinking
971. The shower extract
972. start of say your goodbyes/we believe like you do
973. Information's History: Short Story
974. Bluebeard
975. Easy Street (Chapter 1)
976. Serpents
977. My first chapter! Go nuts!
978. Amazon Breakthrough Novel Award
979. Describing Time
980. Describing Time
981. Charactor Names
982. Can I write?
983. Need A Start.
984. I was bored. :)
985. Perchance to Dream (fantasy, 2800 words ...ish)
986. Crime Fiction
987. Best Opening Chapter Ever
988. just started this piece.
989. Critique please.
990. Sexual Shiatsu
991. With a glass of vodka held to my lips...
992. First few pages of novel (VIBRATIONS) - Rip it apart!
993. My first story - Its about a mans first child birth
994. looking for critique on my piece of text
995. just started to write - now i need people who can read!
996. The Everyman - wrote this intro last night
997. Little help for the newbie?
998. any form of critique would be much appreciated!
999. Help
1000. Take a look at this for me?