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501. feedback on my story please
502. The Life and Times of Lucian Malenkav
503. [Advice Sought] How long do you spend on introductions?
504. What kind of critiques do you prefer?
505. reflective soul
506. PLEASE RATE MY STORY AND GIVE ADVICE PT.1
507. Bloody Roses
508. Roland
509. PT.1 of my story
510. Silent Echoes (preview)
511. untitled story that I am writing
512. The Dog
513. Rhode Island School Of Design College Essay: Art is more than paint..
514. Confused
515. Feedback please?
516. I NEED HELP!!! - Show Me Your Skin (a title, not a request :P)
517. A question on tense
518. Critique of this shorty
519. liberation vs domination
520. opening of a new story im writing
521. Advice on protagonist
522. Character Introductions (366 words)
523. Query--second critique needed
524. Is this interesting at all?
525. Legends, myths, ect.
526. Need humor story feedback
527. Climax of a short storie
528. Cold War Advice
529. Settings for a Story Series
530. Molly and the Agalmata, 1892 words
531. Writing thesis for Cormac McCarthy essay
532. advice needed on style and pretty much everything...
533. Burned-out freelancer seeks advice
534. setting the scene
535. The Spell Reaper, Ch 2 (Fantasy -- 2,509 words)
536. The Spell Reaper, Ch 1 (Fantasy -- 2,359 words)
537. The "War of the Sexes," its likely origin - how should I handle this?
538. Short Piece - How does it read?
539. Concern for a subject.
540. NEW SYNOPSIS...NEED CRITIQUE
541. There Is No Writers' Freedom in America
542. Can We Determine God's Existence
543. Two short parts from-Invasion of America
544. Ideas for my story direction?
545. The Wolves of Rome
546. miana - work in progress
547. How do I make my dialogues sound real?
548. Help with grammar
549. Work in progress.
550. Stuck between endings (theme vs reader satisfaction)
551. Pure, unedited Stream of Consciousness -- What should I do with it?
552. Requesting an Assignment
553. The Seventh House - Chapter 1
554. The Seventh House - Chapter 1
555. Need Critique from someone on my story
556. Candles in the Dark-unfinished
557. Grade 12, Critical Drama Essay
558. I'm in Grade 12, and I have writer's block?
559. Ninja in the rain - critique please
560. Chapter 1: Branded Flame
561. ENTER ROSENCRANTZ PART 2
562. I NEED A CRITIQUE PLEASE - Enter Rosencrantz PART ONE
563. "The Skyscraper" ..would you read on?
564. Minor characters - How much information is needed?
565. Weak starting character?
566. Janitor's plunder
567. Need Help
568. His Last Letter to Her --an unfinished piece from 19 years ago
569. Unconventional vampire story (1,678).
570. Ducks Eat Babies (approx 6,500)
571. Viewpoints: Limits? Too few? Too many?
572. Renfield (about 630 words).
573. Story titles???
574. Another part of untitled story
575. Some of Us Had Blue Eyes Once
576. Family Saga (Part of Chapter 4 + kiss scene))
577. critique and conquer: post your projects here!
578. The Most Unexciting Ferris Wheel
579. Shadeland- critiques please
580. Fantasy plot: critique please
581. Professional editing
582. WL Writers Literary Agency?
583. War- need help with dialogue!!!
584. A Little Faith in Me- Just the Truth
585. Would This Be Genetically Possible?
586. Help with over-writing part 2
587. In need of criticism
588. Chloe, Paranormal Investigator Extraordinaire
589. War - Short Story in need of Critique !
590. No formal outline to follow
591. Help needed with over-writing
592. Prologue of Infiltration - Book 1 of the Gimle Chronicles
593. excerpt needs critique...
594. Does this work as a first chapter?
595. needs critique...
596. Opening to short story, would you want to read more?
597. Critique Please!!!!
598. Kaleb's View. Just a short intro I'd like some input on..
599. Would you read on?
600. have an offer...now what
601. 1,2, and 3.
602. "Flame" intro to a story (edited for readability and such)
603. Helix spire
604. The Trials and Tribulations of Females Dating in Their Twenties
605. intro to untitled story
606. Alone
607. Living Vs. Existing (edited)
608. Redheads, Ya Gotta Love Em (Part 2)
609. "Stagnant" - ~2300 (warning; alcohol, death)
610. WARNING: This story contains nouns! (Please critique)
611. Non-fiction, getting started...
612. Acts Of Treason (Nearly finished; first chapter)
613. Redheads, Ya Gotta Love Em (Part 1)
614. Crime fiction: how much do you reveal?
615. Mercy - Chapter 1 & 2 - Critique please? ^^
616. Bunahmara, Work in progress...Critique please!
617. Still Untitled!
618. Going Home-Critique Please
619. End of chapter 2 (family saga)
620. too many people in the story?
621. Coupla Short Stories
622. 2nd part of chapter 2, (family saga...)
623. Chapter 2: Marshal (Continues from The Light. Critiques wanted!!)
624. Needing Some help
625. The Tango Any ideas/opinions?
626. Help with a freshman definitional essay. (mature theme)
627. Last time for this
628. The Unexpected and Clumsy Heroine of Erlyro, as told by Magic ( ~1000w )
629. Counter Strike (work in progress)
630. The Sins of Us (my gothic horror, finished version)
631. Review
632. Where's your inner sadist?
633. Inspiration input, please.
634. Family saga, huge edit.
635. Southwell Geneology
636. A constant state of distortion
637. Need help with a story involving the Police and Internal Affairs...
638. How's this start ?
639. Setting
640. Real Fun
641. Is this any good?
642. Untitled part 2
643. Untitled - First attempt - Crit please.
644. Help with my introduction! THANK YOU
645. The Young
646. Hostile Intent (Revamped)
647. First Publication Rights?
648. Need feedback for ZenCollegeLife.com
649. better?
650. The First Vampire in the West - WIP (813 words)
651. Evelyn on the Beach (Short Story, 750 words)
652. stream of consciousness?
653. Getting better or worse let me know???
654. Opening pitch for a sequel.
655. How is this beginning?
656. Help With A Story.
657. Chapter Two of Duo of destiny
658. Start of my gothic horror piece - assistance please!
659. Just for fun - The Bite of Love - (505 words)
660. okokokokok which title is better?
661. Coming of Age/Road Story (untitled, 1700 words)
662. What do editors prefer in a format?
663. Killing the Tension (Short Story)
664. the strange day
665. ok now.
666. Point of View Questions
667. Please give me advice on this article
668. tossing out a first line...does it sink or float?
669. Is this good or bad??? really need some advice
670. Revised--Stone of Ages
671. Email from the future
672. An Action Sequence - What do you think?
673. All opinions are welcomed and appreciated
674. Mystical Tiger - 500 words
675. Snowy Masquerade
676. In need of Advice!
677. a complete beginner, Just finished a 60,000 fiction novel
678. The beginning of a writing piece
679. Sophie Emma
680. The Silver Rat- Opinion Welcome!
681. please help, everyone
682. Dark Doppleganger Forest
683. Opening line - Good, or utterly terrible?
684. A Twilight Forest
685. Hullo...concrit, por favor. Been working on this one for a while. (long title)
686. New to Writing, what do you think of my work?
687. the 'first' line
688. Help I Have Stress!
689. The unlucky ones (short scene)
690. The Alchemist's Formulary
691. The Purple Monster That Ate My Story.
692. Creepers in the Basement
693. A ski resort in my backyard.
694. Dark alternate future but does it work?
695. "Wow" in fantasy?
696. Just A Job
697. The Presidential Ball
698. We Hold These Truths To Be Self Evident...
699. Songbird (A more proper place this time)
700. please critique
701. Marijuana Controversy
702. The selves as myth
703. A bit of an experiment with voice. 365 words.
704. 10:18
705. My Ch.1
706. Main Characters From A Novel ... WDYT?
707. Prologue re-written in need of critique
708. according to my last post, do you think i should take out the "flash blast"
709. punctuating dialogue
710. F. Scott Fitzgerald Essay
711. Prose - Writing
712. Mute
713. The Drifter (All advice and critique wanted/welcomed!)
714. Main character questions
715. Writer Interview anyone??
716. I need some advice in starting this chapter correctly
717. First Two paragraphs of Possible beginning. Let me know what you think *honestly*
718. Interrogations (Please review, all advice appreciated!)
719. Another essay (looking for general advice)
720. Advice
721. Editing and Evaluating
722. Prologue in need of assistance
723. Just a few thoughts...
724. Lemonade Man
725. Telling the experience rather than the facts.
726. just some story starter
727. comments on pace please
728. What you think and advice...?
729. hows my citations!!
730. Would you give me some advice? New here.
731. critiqu
732. Advice Needed -- subplots
733. Story summary: USS Blackheart
734. Really want my work to be much better, please critque- i'd appriacte it- ddchap1
735. Confidence
736. Stone of Ages--Critique Needed!
737. Let me know what you think...
738. Living Vs. Existing
739. Intro to a novel (500 wds)
740. Dead Father - Working Title - Movie Scene
741. No title yet
742. Huskydogg Re-Done -- Paper Called Bi-Polar
743. Serenity (Working Title, Fantasy Side Project of Mine)
744. Just an update. 546 Words.
745. Is this a good Idea!
746. The Mist
747. story oh story
748. Before I send it to an Agent
749. Hi I am preparing this promotion material- I need hardcore feedback- Thanks
750. Does a story really need a conflict?