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- First installment of a western I was writing
- new guy here
- Writing Format
- New horror writing by mikhalt
- A little Fiction
- Couples
- Chapter 15-Untitled
- Fiona
- woopsy
- Changing of Seasons...
- frozen sleep
- Here goes nothing...
- Scarlet Letter Essay
- Opinions please
- Bus Number 2500. David. Rena.
- Empty Emotion
- The Kali Tradition. Could you give me your views?
- The Last Goodbye
- Kiln-Chapter Three
- Hoola Hoop - Incomplete
- will ebooks kill the novelist
- A story about war and other stuff, set in Saxon times...
- Revolution of the Mordar Comikotten
- 2 Short Articles
- Idea for a story
- The Window (A short story)
- Some more Writing I have Done
- Three Part Thesis Statement
- The Prophecies
- --Please Need Quick Revision--
- [Drifter]New beginning to chapter three
- Example of some writing I have done
- Putting Out The Fire
- GASP! CHAPTER NINE!
- Kiln-Chapter TWO
- Looking for help with a bigger project
- Perry Pearson
- A short excerpt I dug from the project folder
- Terror Strike 237: Lockdown
- A paper on beowulf - need some help.
- Kiln-First Chapter.
- Prologue for a paranormal piece
- foreshadowing
- Assistance with song.
- Everyone else is doing it
- Criticise Your Hearts Out
- This is a prelude piece for my novel i haven't finished
- Second part to a comic- outline -
- Discription Help! Sort of challenge for you all
- Ch.8 is here. Anticipation is a bitch.
- The buffalo jumped over the sun - Chapter 1
- Term
- Edit of my earlier Mechwarrior Story.
- Ial and the Fall of Droch
- Criticize Me
- Posting My first Short. R&R, thanks!
- The use of slang in your writing
- New Drifter [the ending of chap. one and all of chap. two]
- I'm a little confused!!!!!??????
- My Sci-Fi story thingy.
- Personality Check
- Stranded
- 'V' is for Victory Second Post Up for Critique
- The Feather Bandit.
- SomeNew stuff
- Soccer article, please take a look and advise!
- Quick Responding to a Passage Question: Richard III
- Need help with a murder
- Contemporary Folktale, Titled: Exposed
- For anyone who knows what Mechwarrior is...my twist on it!!
- the beginning of my first chapter of my first novel...
- A wise man's privilege. (BETTER TO READ, line breakers!)
- Golden Butterfly
- Possible Title: "The Demon Keys" - Critique Please
- Chapter One/prologue
- Beginning to an untitled story
- Daniel Caan I. Jack Mori
- how much to write a day?
- Voldo...Part 1...2nd Draft
- The Misguided Distillation of a Childhood Myth
- Have here an idea. fantasy stuff.
- Hell's Gate (working title)
- Untitled Short Story
- Untitled - Advice sought
- Blue & Orange[short story]
- thanks
- Short Writing: Battle
- Voldo....part 2
- Voldo...Part 1
- Shinjiku----part one
- Merilith : Prologue
- Blissful silence, first page.
- Calling all journalists!!
- A cry for help (Redux)
- Chapter Seven is here. Joy.
- Unique or not?
- Having some trouble with the flow of the words...
- First scene of my novel....(Warning: It contains......
- Epic Fantasy Story!
- The little headline
- A True Story With A local Hawaiian Flavor!
- The Shadow (end of Chapter One)
- Need help
- A start of something..
- Church
- Capitolization in Poems?
- A pseudo-story from an old character sketch
- Here comes Chapter Six. Try not to scream with delight...
- Some pieces that require advice/critique
- Tofurkey Usurps Another Gleaming Meal
- Exactica - Short Fiction
- Help~would you offer me some voice chat room?~
- Is it true that most writers are poor and jobless?
- Chapter Five BUM BUM BUM!
- Keepers of the Dark - Continuation
- Calming Blood (Conclusion)
- no title short story
- Fourth Chapter, and the plot thickens, AGAIN *GASP*
- Reflections of My Journey Into the Mind
- New Short
- The exotic dance of the stallions.
- Brothers On A Stormy Sea
- short story 'straight line' -seeking critique/thoughts
- short story 'straight line' -seeking critique/thoughts
- Essay 2!?!? NEW Finished essay please look!!
- Chapter Three...and the plot thickens
- First chapter of juvenile book -- :)
- The Longest Mile
- The Red Lantern (W.I.P)
- The Hole In The Toilet Paper That Was Like 'AAAAH!'
- Some avante garde prose
- MMM Chapter Two of my story. Arn't you excited? No?!
- The Shadow (Chapter 1, pages 7 - 9)
- An unfinished prologue to an unnamed story. Mmm, vague...
- My first Short Story
- Aspiring Writer would like to know. . .
- Special case of an opening
- Calming Blood (Part 2)
- Revised Redemp.--1st person, ch.1
- Mystery Novels: 1st or 3rd person?
- Concerning DRIFTER
- Another unsuccessful attempt to kick the junk...
- ok Mr. Pawn sir. Spank me, I'm new.
- The Lady from Buffalo Island
- Story about redemption and the consequences of secrets GASP
- HOPEFULLY YOU'LL LIKE THIS....
- Press Release Critique
- Story Starters......
- Calming Blood (Part 1)
- Airport
- First part of Chapter Two
- Flowers
- Query
- New Story ( Archangel Gabriel )
- A Story: Working on title =)
- The Shadow (Chapter One, pages 4-6)
- La Dolce Vita
- Keepers of the Dark
- The Untitled adventures of Otto (obviously needs a new name)
- First attempt at writing in a long time.
- Cafe' Switchblade
- New Story, Untitled, Part I
- Inspirational for battered women
- How sad
- Chapter 3 Kali Tradition
- A General Criticism - Please Read
- Anti-SAVE CH 3-5
- Blood of the Faustus: Prologue
- "what held her back"
- First piece posted.
- advent ennui
- Research...
- Untitled
- Combat sequences?
- SNIPPET: Equilibrium III
- drifter: chapter three[part two added now]
- The Shadow (Prologue and more of chapter one)
- uhhh...
- here's my story
- HEY CUTIES hah i really need help with my creative writting.
- Sloan, Mastermind (part 2)
- Anti-SAVE Prologue, CH 1, CH 2, CH3
- Absorbed
- Please read this and give me your views...
- Waspflies: Prologue & chapter 1
- HELP
- "Soul Tingling"
- HELP WITH INTRO
- Second half of Chapter 1
- Unknown
- Work in progress...
- The Cashier
- Hi, please read, a part of Chapter 1
- The Edgelands (starting)
- The Whisper of Serpents Chapter 2
- 'V' is for Victory (Working title) - WW2 Fiction
- First paper for Comp
- An interesting beginning? Or a waste of precious time?
- "Scyent" (working title)
- Drifter: Chapter two[final version added]
- two friend chating
- A couple of unfinished scenes in need of some critiquing.
- Very Short Story
- The Kali Tradition- Chapter One (2nd Part)
- The Kali Tradition- Chapter One (1st half)
- The Cube (short story)
- The Fallen One
- writing humorous narratives
- Drifter: Chapter one
- The Edderington Ferry, another workshop piece
- The moment of truth. . . . .
- The Muse - a workshop piece. PLEASE be brutal
- "God's Presents"- essay
- Life and Times of Magnus...
- A Real Name for a Sorceress
- Help with simile
- Offering to critique (the best I can)
- American Sewage
- Need help with thesis statement
- The Mother: Fertility ( I )
- 'Inevitability for Sale' - revised beginning any good?
- And in my sleep I dreamed...
- Is it clear?
- Nalea
- Darkness. Constuctive criticism wanted.
- hear me out
- The Long Wait - half through. want to know what you think.
- Should I re-write my first chapter? Help please ^.^
- Iona
- Comic outline - prologue - "In the pursuit of truth&
- Pieces to my poem-story project
- No Faith
- A price for Justice
- Drifter: walking tales[part three added]
- Friends will never tell you if your writing stinks.
- Cit Names and History Brainstorm
- Novel-Untitled (Scene Two)
- City Name brainstoms
- Give up or Keep Trying..?
- A Unknow Hero
- Start of a Story
- channeling thoughts
- The Businessman
- Feedback on first-person POV
- Chaos
- Rapunzle Revisted
- Pain Is What Makes love Beatiful
- Be brutal.
- What do you think? Critique and Advice Welcomed.
- Crusader Team