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- I have an idea for the short story
- Vacet Needs HELP!
- Critique
- College Essay, need Critics
- Ok, I need help in my story...*cough*...again....*cough*
- Dream and Drop (Fiction- Climbing/Mountaineering)
- I Could use some help...
- New User with a New Story
- Which is Better? ["Exodus" Ch 1 - *Some swearing*]
- Non Fiction - Climbing/Mountaineering
- Weird Thing I like to call "WTF AM I WRITING?!"
- REDEMPTION
- A Blood Red Scarf - Prologue
- Thought Provoking
- why India was such an important assest in the Victorian Era
- I Love My Chair
- Advice on writing horror
- First Four Chapters of Manic Youth
- An original story out of a cliche?
- is this fine or phony?
- Crossing Space--First time writer
- Chapter 1: The Renewing (a fully expandable novel)
- The Adventures of El Chupacabra
- Random Writing Night #1 (short)
- Clouded Skies EX
- For House and Hall
- Prologue: Charon And Asto Vidatu
- Another section of Paladin's Mess
- Introduction to the Villain
- Autobiography: Manic Youth
- Chapter One: A Seer's Anger
- C2 - The Shadow Men (small extract)
- A Pinhole in the Window of Reality
- How do you do to think of a plot?
- Dawn of Night
- Prologue part 2
- Depression
- Cleric Academy - plans and characters
- Another Prologue
- Hypothetical Birthday Card Message...
- Legends of Ivalice: Dragon Skies
- Torrential Reign - Style Draft
- Prolouge: The Coming of the One
- original lyrics that I'm not too sure about...
- a lil something
- Besh's story prologue! Final installment has been added! BAM
- My Prologue/Introduction - Does it cut the mustard?
- Frossty Thoughts - Quintuplets
- At least it's a start?
- Summer's Magic
- Poem - Summer '04
- Went back to work
- Blake and the Burning Man
- help in my essay
- Madness
- Unfamiliar setting for me...
- Where do you draw the line?
- The Brink - With paragraphs
- Any good as the start of a novel?
- Can someone please critique my novel "The Gift"
- Welcome to the Underworld
- The Brink - Prologue
- Need Help....(Improvement)..
- " Three little Sheep" Mason Herbert short story
- My Best Friend - Toffey
- [deleted]
- Am I too young?
- An untitled exercise.
- Love At Third Sight
- Oranges - re-picked and ready for tasting
- The Bitching of Havana Stein
- The Bitching Of Havana Stein
- Anthony
- Love At First Sight-
- polymer handsys (a train of thought this train speeds)
- Prologues (Compare/Contrast)
- What do you think of this?
- Hunter Thompson Creative Writing Paper
- Entry for a competition
- Dream Sequence - All The China Dolls - 8th draft
- Just Can't Get This Right
- Looking for more feedback on my novel...
- Is this line right?
- Lecture
- City by the Lake
- Fiction Land- Chapter 1 (approx. 1150 words)
- Review of "Lord of the Rings" in general.
- i need help in my story.
- Oranges
- the famous-writers block!
- Letdown, a poem
- [Insert a sad title here]
- The Xibix Cube
- My Story, which needs a lot of help
- "The World Once Forgotten"
- political porno
- fruity political cocktails
- vegetable heads needed
- Woe. Angst. Misery. Etc.
- A few stories...
- Need some feedback!!
- Unrealistic images portrayed in the media
- Paladin
- The Complete Idiots Guide to Making a Monster
- Short Stuff!
- The beginning
- Let's Cuddle Now
- Which one is it?
- Hole in My Jeans--Beginnings of a story
- Above the Skies- Chapter One (in the revision stages)
- Summer Symphony....(REVISED...AGAIN)(4/20/05)
- Short section.
- Untitled Novel - Chapter 2
- First chapter: Approx 2000 words.
- Untitled(Post Modern, Sci-Fi/Fantasy 927 words) plz critique
- White Walled Small Community
- The Andy Smith Legend
- redemption
- Short Story - The Boy Who Could Beat The Fair
- Short action sequence
- Untitled Novel w/ Chapter 1 Revision
- does this sound to old?
- The Impossible Dream (story removed)
- New idea to a beginning of a novel
- Can someone tell me what they think of this?
- 1 in 12 Wins
- Please critique and comment - "Suprisingly Chile"
- Frossty Thoughts - Agent Dorian Hastings (Updated April 12)
- Just A Sneak Peak Of My New Magazine Story
- God I love writing!
- 2nd chapter of fantasy story
- Theives and old ladies
- Chapter 2 - Pyscologically Changed
- Prolgue-Just 547 Words...Help Needed Please.
- Chapter 1 - Pyschologically Changed
- Shaman: Almost "Done"
- The Start To A Story
- Solitaire - 2nd part and Revised 1st part
- First times the charm, right?
- Solitaire - a beginning
- Re worked opening
- Fantasy story first chapter.. up for critiquing
- Chapter 1: The Waterhouse-I Need Any Help I can Get Please!
- Chapter 1: In the Footsteps of Giants
- Drugs according to me
- Graduation Speech
- horror story beginning
- Fantasy- Above the Skies: Imbalance (rough draft- chap 1)
- A Healing Pool - First Two Parts - Unfinished
- *Revised* Draw in or Draw away
- The Place To Call My Own
- Broken Hourglass
- Detective story....
- A fantasy with promise
- Just Desserts - First try at a lot of stuff
- April Rain
- post-shy
- Flow
- First time I ever posted a piece for people to see
- the reality of relationships
- haunted
- Bed-time Story
- Time Flies (It's Star Wars on drugs!)
- The Rose (Untitled)--continuation of first part
- Synopsis of a Work-In-Progress Dealing with Teenager Drama
- Dream Sequence...
- Paper Tigers--some mild sexual content
- Intro to novel.. is it a draw in or a draw away?
- Incoming the rest of chapter 6 up to 9
- Incoming chapter six and more
- The next few chapters of Incoming
- Work in Progress... any and all critique welcome...
- Audrey Elise
- The Rose (Untitled)--beginnings of a novel
- The second half of Prelude
- Here is a preview of a non fictional story in progress
- Here is a preview of a sci fi story I've been working on.
- A Spit of a Town...short beginning
- Just the One
- My first stroy...plot
- Soul Mate
- "The Legend." (horror/history)
- historical fiction: mysterious beginnings....
- got a min?
- Critiquing a newspaper article.
- Tollite Soccos
- For Mother (the result of yet another writing exercise)
- Exile
- in desparate need of a read
- CAUTION - May Offend(?) - Unfinished Writing - Untitled
- The Notebook (no, not the romantic story)
- My first writing, 1st chapter, 2nd draft.
- Civilisation - Please Read, And Be Gentle
- Historical Fiction. Any and all critique is acknowledged.
- shortest story ever..........
- Critique Needed Badly
- Frer Monstrau (rhyming piece I started)
- Agronomer's Mystery
- deleted
- MAJOR character problem here!!!
- Article on GM Food
- "Incompetence Hits Home"
- Honey and Rain **CAUTION**
- Quick Story Question
- To Kill a Man
- Harper (2137 words)
- A Soldier Marches
- A catch for a short story
- Death to Her
- MSPD
- The Cliff -Please Critic a Newbies Work :)
- French Resistance PT. 5!!! Read or be bored!
- the tv and a drip somewhere
- Easter Weekend (Violance and some sexual situations)
- Robot
- Need Poetry Help
- So Amazing(Advice)
- HIM
- please read and critique, thank you
- Query letter
- Removed for future publication
- Flash fiction ... very quick read
- dont know where to ask this but, how is Children spelled in-
- Down With the Sickness
- Work in progress, first chapter. EDIT: Revised
- Research Paper
- query
- Prima Vista: How to describe your fantasy land
- Help w/ Dialouge
- Story deleted. Please ignore.
- Removed for future publication
- Another column
- Frossty Thoughts - Shadow and Light - Sacrifice
- Locked in a barn with a scary dude!
- spooky... not.
- Caught (Flash)
- What do you think of this as a concept?
- Untitled
- Retitled: Monster-in-Law (updated march 22)
- Deadly Desires....Revised
- Still a few kinks (5th part; edited quite a bit)
- Looking for Harsh Critique
- Like Father, Like Daughter WORD COUNT: 1534
- No More Nights Like Tonight
- Power (more)
- Stuck
- Great Gatsby Essay..
- For Freedom and Glory (my novel)
- Ghost Town
- The Anagram.