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- Smile or Spit?
- USEC [Short Story]
- The Ecstasy & the Agony 2
- Untitled at the moment (short story)
- prologue should i just keep going or not?
- "I Read East of Eden" - - Should I Have Handed this In???
- The third plane
- Steeplechase
- The Willing
- Angels of Destiny
- July 4th part 1
- Inspiration for ideas.
- A son's revelation
- Amber Alert (from At Winter's Door)
- The Present (an X-mas Fic)
- A visual walk, every steps a new life to live
- essay i wrote
- Excerpt: "At Winter's Door
- just some thing i have ben wrighting what do you think
- What would you rate my practice essay for SAT?
- Molly's Place
- If there's anyone who like critiquing long stories, please read!
- Loss of Reason
- First chapter of a story
- Help with grammar
- help with emotions
- Text for small invitation card
- Ethanol as a primary fuel. Please critique/edit
- Independent Film Project
- Any Help would be greatly apreciated. Be brutal.
- What do you think of this as an opening to my story? Is it any good?
- "Think Before Reading This" A work in progress...
- Can you looked this over
- Sit-rep (working title)
- Help please
- The Beginning of My Short Story - C&C por favor
- Perseus - Chapter 1
- Hamlet essay for critique
- How Can I make This Better
- "Nicole" First Chapter
- college admission essay
- Making Lists with Commas?
- From my novel.
- I need help revising my essay for college.
- Story, and dialogue from a video game I'm making.
- The Shellie
- a few very short bits&pieces
- Excerpt from my story
- Pirates, with Elizabeth McCoy
- The Untold Story of an Unwanted Man (Poem)
- Typesetting and hyphenation
- I made this!
- 'Sarah' Horror/Drama (2051wrds)
- First page - opinions, anyone?
- Where do i go?
- edited yet again, what do you think???
- A short writing of mine.
- A Tangle of Problems :)
- Mary-sue possiblility?
- Quotes in thoughts
- Characters & revealing too much too soon?
- Looking for illustrator.
- "Wonderful Killer" segments from a novel
- My transistions seem forced -- help :)
- New manga script idea - your thoughts?
- Flash Fiction- 433 words
- A Train-Yard Night
- I need advice on a fiction sort of romance here
- Which Beginning?
- Yin Yang
- edited what do you think now???
- I need help in my thesis statement
- Essay on Episodic Content (1447 words)
- Is it ok to mention an allusion in an English reponse?
- I need some massive help with grammer please
- THOUGHTS...
- Help on what needs to be changed, added to, ect.
- Sigma I(working title) - Chapter 1
- Just Another Hurdle
- Tales of Vivion
- new book really need an opinion
- new book.
- CHARACTER PROFILE HELP
- Battlefield of Mind (Part One)
- The Yellow Dress (837 words)
- Major Help Needed.
- Help with Precis Writing
- Shwippy: A tale of obsession - humour, short story - 1800 words
- Eerie Shadow
- Advice regarding tense
- The hardest part....writing a synopsis!! Your views?
- Dreaming Reality...
- Norwegian Wood - Chapter 12, written by me
- A bandfriend.
- Some more poetic experimentation
- Spark (Working Title)
- What is best in the end
- How To Make It In A Heavy Metal Band
- The ballad of an ageing salesman
- Polaire
- A good idea?
- Distorted Hysteria-Chapter one; re-edited.
- Distorted Hysteria-Chapter one; re-edited.
- Anyone want to proofread my paper?
- ch 1 (1000 words) - Any critique appreciated - i'd return favor
- Fight scene with dragon
- called dying ashes rise to flame
- Remembering Maria.....
- The Legacy of an Escapist
- Advice of Flashbacks...A scene from my story
- Chapter 3 Part 1
- A Friendly Reminder to those who post
- Just need a bit of feedback
- Could anyone help? Id return the critique
- LEDA AND HER DEMON LOVER
- First Chapter of something I'm writing..
- would this make for a good story
- historical/archeaological fantacy
- A Book Review on Bias
- Plotseekers (metafiction/fantasy novel)
- "Don Lewis"
- Convincing Character ability
- My Prologue - please read
- Chapter 10 (not by attachment)
- Alexx
- Forbidden
- Mouth full of matchsticks
- A Gathering of Varying, Various, Vaccuous Observations. . .
- Prologue- Austin (suggestions?)
- Sick of Living, 1000 words
- Tear it to shreds if you will just tell me the truth
- The New Lady
- Nobody leaves this place without....
- Quarantine
- Ano Dominos (Some Naughty Language)
- Intro to my crazy satire novel (~2000 words)
- The Nameless
- End of world 2
- End of the world
- Need help on plot link
- Weird idea, any comments/ critique/suggestions appreciated and reciprocated
- Jasmines Destiny - My attempt at Romance
- Where does it end?
- Plots & Titles Suck
- Please be honest (first three chapters)
- Chapter 1: Disaster at the Midnight Moon Festivite
- Short (800 word) easy read - fun novella?
- Proofreading rates
- Wasn't sure where to put this. PLEASE HELP ME!
- Its only half finished and I'm wondering if it makes sense. Thanks!
- thanks if you can critque this chapter!
- Against You We Are All Soldiers
- The Last Bullet
- Part II: Chapter 1: Figures of the Night (Arkadian Tales) (929 words)
- So what do you think - be honest please (FYI: 2307 words)
- Unamed Unknown (redone)
- Criminal Theory Essay - Quick Edit Only
- Part I; Chapter 1: Figures of the Night (Arkadian Tales)(887 words)
- The Half of It
- Help HELP AND HELP lol -__-''
- Seeking Advice
- Essay Help
- A Sonnet
- Anyone writing a sappy romance?
- Replacing Humanity
- A strange prologue, all comments appreciated!
- Writing crisis!
- Everybody has a story
- A flicker on.... Feedback appreciated! (1400 words approx)
- Popcorn, my love (1842 words)
- When I Am Finished
- I can only write short storys. help
- Your Opinion: The Better Title
- Tempt the Messiah - writing an introduction
- I don't know how well I write...
- freedom HELP
- Dream from my book
- Untitled (and Unfinished) Fantasy Project-Opinions Appreciated
- A Day in the Life of a Contract Killer *Unfinished*
- I'm retarded when it comes to grammar..proofreading please?
- Grandma
- A viable story idea? Dream Manipulation...
- Panic (250 words)
- FiveParagraphEssay on-how-to-write-a FiveParagraphEssay
- The Longest Time I've Been Awake
- Afterlife
- City; a prologue (fiction)
- Untitled poem
- Overture: 277 words - Would like serious critique.
- Me, The Runaway, and the Man (language)
- Springtime Has Faded
- The Collector (tentative)
- The bitch (256 words, language)
- Results of an interesting exercise
- Gothic style love/life
- What do you think about this idea?
- A few words from a relative newbie
- A Lesson in Loss
- Forgive me Father
- The Beginning
- Summer Wind
- The Ass and the Bucket
- Sandstrom
- A Rambling Prolouge
- Thank U
- New Shoes.
- Essay - Marie Curie - Advice Please
- No Title. Disclaimer- Some Violence
- A Bleeding Coffin
- Finding the Right Way
- The Backslider 1500 words Chapter 1
- The Drink sent us Raving (496 wds w/title, History Day process paper)
- The Crown Prince
- Divine Configurations (~600 words)
- It's My Life and You're Welcome to It
- Bones: A Murder Mystery
- Introduction to a book.
- Ruby Tuesday - Part III (1000 words)
- Invasion - Book #1 D.I.S.C.
- Anglo-Saxon Literature(as compared with greek drama)
- Seeking Advice (Writing Excerpt Included)
- No Title Yet...Any Suggestions??? and How's My Style? *a bad word*
- The Institute, pt 2 @980 words
- What's Next?
- Target-Chapter 2
- Patrol - Working title
- fantasy chapter
- The Institute, @1200w
- Untitled prologue critique (300~ words)
- Hi I'm new and looking for some advice...
- Target
- story lengths
- Just a short piece...
- last night together
- Intimacy (Still Working On the Title...)
- Ruby Tuesday [Part II]
- Flash/Drama "The Airshow" {~500 words}
- Odyssey-1900's (A Chinese Girl)
- ss - confessions of a fallen angel
- Late for Class - 1409 words
- The Argument - 1364 words
- Blurb (revised)
- Sevastian ch 1 / 497 words
- Future Fugitive / 1127 words
- Crossroads, Chapter 1 (Drama, ~2200 words)
- Help Me!
- War
- The Find
- seeking critique and advice! pt 2
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